When I was shrunk i would sneak in the teachers staff room during play time I would sneak into the teachers staff room and I would steal all f there drinks and Biscuits . But the problem might be that the Biscuits might crush me or some one could stand on me. So on Thursday we got our photos taken so we could get shrunk.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Sarsha,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Hannah from wbs, I am from your buddy class that comments on your learning. Go see my classes intros, (mine is the last slide.) :)
I really like your story, it is very creative. I would totally do that myself because the teachers at my school always have delicious cakes and biscuits. Next time, you could reread and edit your story because there are a few things that you can easily fix, like spelling and punctuation.
Also, why did you put “I would sneak into the teachers staffroom,” twice.
From Hannah :)
Hi Sarsha
ReplyDeleteI am Kaedyn I really like your mini me
can you please post some more posts.