Personal Recount
Hello My name is Sarsha. I am 10 years old I am nearly 11 .
I go to blaketown school in the west coast it isn't really wet in greymouth it is sometimes fine.
When I am at school I like to do art and wright storeys in class.
I am in room 2 it is a very fun class I am a year 6 and I love to wright about my crazy friends.
My friends are Lily-star ,storm,morgin,aimee, sophie, Trinity ,abby ,lara,naitlera.
At morning tea i do gymnasticas or play bull rush it is really fun
I am doing at dance for my assembly next friday we have been practising
it for 3 weeks now and the dance is looking amazing we are still working on it still it is looking better thought. .
Hi Sarsha ,
ReplyDeleteI like how you write down what you do in class ,
I also like playing bull rush ,
I think you should re-read your work for punctuation.
Other than that good work!
Hi Flapo
DeleteThank you for the great comment thanks I will rember that for next time thank you for the comment again.
Bye