Thursday, 15 June 2017

Write about space

We have finally arrived at the moon. We can  see the moon holes on top of the moon.  My sister can hear the Rocket ship turning off.  I can smell my sweat from the  suit.  My brother can feel how hard  the Moon
rocks are.

By Sarsha

1 comment:

  1. Hi Sarsha!

    My name is Ellee and I will be blogging with you this summer for the Summer Learning journey!

    This is such a cool video and story! What a great piece of descriptive writing! I am glad you got to the moon with your sister that would be so much fun, I think I would also take my brother and sister to the moon with me if I could!
    If you would like to keep practising your writing and video making over the summer check out our activities for the summer learning journey!

    If you want to check out the Summer Learning Journey website you can follow this link:

    Here is also a link to the weekly activities:

    Remember each activity is worth points so make sure once you’ve finished an activity post it up on your blog so we can add it to your total!

    Hopefully I'll see you blogging over the summer soon!

    Ellee :)


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